Hamish, there are some interesting observations on the reading path and connotations of aspects of mise-en-scene, but you need to be more precise with semiotics - connotation, signifier, myth (instead of symbol). In terms of the use of prezi - it would be useful for the analysis not to be a block of text, but use arrows and link visually to aspects of the design to be more precise. Highlight key terms. Task incomplete - magazine advert needs to be analysed, even if its not the same product. A solid start - but will need some improvement for L4
Well done Hamish - this is improved in terms of it's layout and you also look at a print magazine advert now. The digipak could provide some real visual inspiration for your final piece.
Hamish, there are some interesting observations on the reading path and connotations of aspects of mise-en-scene, but you need to be more precise with semiotics - connotation, signifier, myth (instead of symbol). In terms of the use of prezi - it would be useful for the analysis not to be a block of text, but use arrows and link visually to aspects of the design to be more precise. Highlight key terms. Task incomplete - magazine advert needs to be analysed, even if its not the same product. A solid start - but will need some improvement for L4
ReplyDeleteWell done Hamish - this is improved in terms of it's layout and you also look at a print magazine advert now. The digipak could provide some real visual inspiration for your final piece.
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