Pitch Feedback

We presented our pitch as a group to the class and received some good feedback
Strengths:
- Detailed concept and track breakdown
- The locations were relevant and a good choice
- Impressed with the Kite idea as a signifier
- Narrative and music were linked well


Areas for development:
- We need to go over the section about our character rejecting her friends. The class and teachers did not think this would fit so well with the rest of the music video.
- We should think about grey-scaling and how much we want to do because too much may not work well for the cliffs section as we want the colour of the white cliffs to be present
- We could perhaps imply that the boyfriend jumped off the cliff, or his death is to do with the cliffs creating even more reason for her to go to the cliffs.


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